Ok, after some fits and starts, I finally decided on this pattern for my sewalong pattern:
It actually has similar bodice lines as my other sundress pattern, and the best part is I now have TWO vintage dress patterns fitted! (I did fit my other pattern, I just got more interested in this one before I made the real thing!)
Here is the finished dress:
And, if you'd like to read more about the process, it's all there on my blog!